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Thursday, July 07, 2005

Epitaph

I have sat on the one treed hill,
Have seen
Too many births,
Too many deaths.
Too few lives.
Yours were not so special.

You trod the earth, knowing
The ocean and western breeze
Would be your resting place.

By rights, you died
In war at twenty,
Of shame at thirty,
Of drink at fifty.
But the devil is good
At looking after his own.

You choked me with ashes,
I will drown you with tears.

Rest in peace.

9 Comments:

  • I like:
    By rights, you died
    In war at twenty,
    Of shame at thirty,
    Of drink at fifty.
    But the devil is good
    At looking after his own.

    the rest... I'm not so sure on.

    L.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at July 07, 2005 7:15 PM  

  • It's the best i can do while my muse is on long service leave.

    By Blogger Yuki, at July 07, 2005 7:20 PM  

  • Awwww Alan...
    hey here's a challenge, try writing a happy poem XD and I mean HAPPY happy, not cryptic happy. I'm sure Alan has something to be happy about *winks*

    By Blogger εïз (c h i l l y), at July 07, 2005 9:15 PM  

  • What are you winking about? Did Fitzo and Coombes both die without me knowing? Because that'd definitely make me happy.

    By Blogger Yuki, at July 07, 2005 9:22 PM  

  • I think we all know that extream angst and extream joy makes a poetaster... so alan, try and move away from the extream angst eh? I challange you to do something metapoetic... like an ode to your pen.

    L.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at July 08, 2005 7:38 PM  

  • An ode to my pen would be so absurdly pointless i may just give it a shot... just as soon as I've finished my reflection statement.

    By Blogger Yuki, at July 08, 2005 11:08 PM  

  • This isn't an ode in itself, but it can be called an ode:

    The pen slides on strings of ink,
    And soon the ink is gone.
    And I exist only in my writing.

    Man I'm good. No doubt about it. Yep.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at July 09, 2005 3:57 PM  

  • Don't flatter yourself.

    By Blogger Yuki, at July 09, 2005 7:22 PM  

  • *looks around in horror* INK IS GONE!!! No! where did it go?

    L.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at July 09, 2005 8:36 PM  

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